Thriving Fire

Its art like this that makes me wish I could draw... Or paint... Or colour in :) Looks brilliant, and I love the amout of detail in the scales and ...

Hmm, it's not a bad poem by any means, its actually quite good, but one or two things are irking me. Firstly, you veer dangerously close to cliche in your ...

But can't they find a more impressive way of expressing themselves? Sure, its conceptual, but seriously, create a conceptual masterpiece. A splodge requires no skill at all, AT ALL. It's ...

I like this but I'm going to give you my argument before critiquing it. Basically you can call anything that truly expresses someone's feelings art. Be that a box, be ...

Surreal used the phrase 'hard and fast rule' above me... Well, in my opinion the only hard and fast rule in writing should be that the author do what he/she ...

Love it!!! I've always been of these kind of poems, with ordinary language given great depth and detail by splitting the lines. You force the reader to take every word ...

What's amazing about this is how well intertwined the two ideas are: you could take it as a poem all about getting run over, or sex, or both. It's all ...

I'm sick of being positive on here. Sick of reading poems that I instantly fall in love with and grow jealous of. And goddammit, tyou've gone and written me another ...

Loved it. The imagery's great, particularly in stanzas 4 and 5, where its somehow vivid and simple at the same time. The concept is nice, and the way you answer ...

Sorry, I completely forgot about this, but I'll start proper now. Brian Dempsey- From the (relative) safety of the trench, Dempsey watched the ensuing battle with worried eyes. Not scared ...

We Might As Well Be Strangers- Keane

Hmm... I'm confused as to how a drunk man being burned alive by his drunk wife can be in any way funny... Oh, wait now I get it. Anyway, it's ...

I liked this, I really did. The imagery, and the atmosphere. Especially the atmosphere: I really get the sense of something apocalyptic, which is very cool. That's tied in with ...

Hmm... I could do the whole literary critic thing and analyse your expression, the flow of the piece, all that jazz, but I'm not in the mood. I'm gonna annoy ...

I'm not overly fond of this, simply because I've written a lot better, but it comes from somewhere dark, where deep meaning is less important than honesty. And at any ...